My grandpa went to pares france, and she loved to bungey jump, so she jumped
off the eiffel tower. She did it very good so she and she liked ti so she did it agen
climed up all the stares agenand did it agen. After that she had to go get o hot dog
but insted she got a pizza she loves pizza. so for the next cupel of days she got pizza
when she came back she was so exsited because she got a call from the people how
write the world recerd book and she is in the world recerd book for the bigst and
longestbungey jump.
5-5-10
people how dance so much that they miss there life like your b-day.
people how have bisnes trips and miss there kids b-days
kids how have to servie on there owne.
kids how hate to read then they learn to and they love it.
have a dream and do it.
5-6-10
being bulead.
not having friends .
looking weard.
flunking school.
picked on by family.
parents devorest.
5-7-10
every one needs a friend.
kids how have to take care for them selves.
a girl how wants to travel but her parents don't like to so she is not aloud to
so when her best friend asks her to go to florda dose she say yes dose
she get in truble?
Wow, great story idea! If you stick with this, make sure you tell about all the feelings and inner story thoughts.-Ms. Schwieters-- Huge list! These all have great potential!! Your travel idea is interesting... hmmm what would happen?
5-11-10
outside
Brown hair
Light skin
Tall
Freckles
Always smilling
Always happy
Chear full
Inside
Cold
Scared of thunderstorms
Gets nerves
scared to stand up for herself
Gets nerves
You have a great start. You have given your character weaknesses. What about their strengths? What is positive about your character?-Ms. Schwieters
5-14-10
To go to Florida because she
lives in Minnesota were it is
cold and her friends tell her
how worm it is there.
To travel because all her friends
travel and tell her how amazing
it is.and that she wants to have
the experience of being on a
plane.
Her parents don't like to travel.
Because when the go on planes
they always get sick.
And her parents are to busy
with there work.
5-4-10
My grandpa went to pares france, and she loved to bungey jump, so she jumped
off the eiffel tower. She did it very good so she and she liked ti so she did it agen
climed up all the stares agenand did it agen. After that she had to go get o hot dog
but insted she got a pizza she loves pizza. so for the next cupel of days she got pizza
when she came back she was so exsited because she got a call from the people how
write the world recerd book and she is in the world recerd book for the bigst and
longestbungey jump.
5-5-10
people how dance so much that they miss there life like your b-day.
people how have bisnes trips and miss there kids b-days
kids how have to servie on there owne.
kids how hate to read then they learn to and they love it.
have a dream and do it.
5-6-10
being bulead.
not having friends .
looking weard.
flunking school.
picked on by family.
parents devorest.
5-7-10
every one needs a friend.
kids how have to take care for them selves.
a girl how wants to travel but her parents don't like to so she is not aloud to
so when her best friend asks her to go to florda dose she say yes dose
she get in truble?
Wow, great story idea! If you stick with this, make sure you tell about all the feelings and inner story thoughts.-Ms. Schwieters-- Huge list! These all have great potential!! Your travel idea is interesting... hmmm what would happen?
5-11-10
outside
Inside
You have a great start. You have given your character weaknesses. What about their strengths? What is positive about your character?-Ms. Schwieters
5-14-10
To go to Florida because she
lives in Minnesota were it is
cold and her friends tell her
how worm it is there.
To travel because all her friends
travel and tell her how amazing
it is.and that she wants to have
the experience of being on a
plane.
Her parents don't like to travel.
Because when the go on planes
they always get sick.
And her parents are to busy
with there work.